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	<title>Comments on: Profound Poetry</title>
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		<title>By: SpoilSport</title>
		<link>http://www.smithmountainhomes.com/news/2008/10/profound-poetry/comment-page-1/#comment-40705</link>
		<dc:creator>SpoilSport</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Oct 2010 16:47:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m pretty sure that&#039;s Phyllis McCormack&#039;s &quot;Look Closer Nurse&quot; (AKA &quot;Crabbit Old Woman&quot;), mucked up as this version and mushy story may be. 

Phyllis was a nurse at Sunnyside Royal Hospital (Montrose, Scotland) in the 60&#039;s; the poem was published in the poetry anthology &quot;Elders&quot; in 1973.

Just for fun, here&#039;s Phoebe Hesketh&#039;s &quot;Geriatric Ward&quot;, a slightly different &#039;and IMHO better) spin on the same situation:
...
Feeding time in the geriatric ward;
I wondered how they found their mouths,
and seeing that not one looked up, inquired
&#039;Do they have souls?&#039;

&#039;If I had a machine-gun,&#039; answered the doctor
&#039;I&#039;d show you dignity in death instead of living death.
Death wasn&#039;t meant to be kept alive.
But we&#039;re under orders
to pump blood and air in after the mind&#039;s gone.
I don&#039;t understand souls;
I only learned about cells
law-abiding as leaves
withering under frost.
But we, never handing over
to mother who knows best,
spray cabbages with oxygen, hoping for a smile,
count pulses of breathing bags whose direction is lost,
and think we&#039;ve won.

Here&#039;s a game you can&#039;t win - 
One by one they ooze away in the cold.
There&#039;s no society forbidding
this dragged-out detention of the old-&#039;
...
Sorry, folks :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m pretty sure that&#8217;s Phyllis McCormack&#8217;s &#8220;Look Closer Nurse&#8221; (AKA &#8220;Crabbit Old Woman&#8221;), mucked up as this version and mushy story may be. </p>
<p>Phyllis was a nurse at Sunnyside Royal Hospital (Montrose, Scotland) in the 60&#8242;s; the poem was published in the poetry anthology &#8220;Elders&#8221; in 1973.</p>
<p>Just for fun, here&#8217;s Phoebe Hesketh&#8217;s &#8220;Geriatric Ward&#8221;, a slightly different &#8216;and IMHO better) spin on the same situation:<br />
&#8230;<br />
Feeding time in the geriatric ward;<br />
I wondered how they found their mouths,<br />
and seeing that not one looked up, inquired<br />
&#8216;Do they have souls?&#8217;</p>
<p>&#8216;If I had a machine-gun,&#8217; answered the doctor<br />
&#8216;I&#8217;d show you dignity in death instead of living death.<br />
Death wasn&#8217;t meant to be kept alive.<br />
But we&#8217;re under orders<br />
to pump blood and air in after the mind&#8217;s gone.<br />
I don&#8217;t understand souls;<br />
I only learned about cells<br />
law-abiding as leaves<br />
withering under frost.<br />
But we, never handing over<br />
to mother who knows best,<br />
spray cabbages with oxygen, hoping for a smile,<br />
count pulses of breathing bags whose direction is lost,<br />
and think we&#8217;ve won.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s a game you can&#8217;t win &#8211;<br />
One by one they ooze away in the cold.<br />
There&#8217;s no society forbidding<br />
this dragged-out detention of the old-&#8217;<br />
&#8230;<br />
Sorry, folks <img src='http://www.smithmountainhomes.com/news/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Paul Moore</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paul Moore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Sep 2010 21:40:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I understand your feelings Mandy. I reacted with emotion as well. It is hard to believe anyone would not feel the same.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I understand your feelings Mandy. I reacted with emotion as well. It is hard to believe anyone would not feel the same.</p>
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		<title>By: Mandy Fitzgerral</title>
		<link>http://www.smithmountainhomes.com/news/2008/10/profound-poetry/comment-page-1/#comment-39750</link>
		<dc:creator>Mandy Fitzgerral</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Sep 2010 14:44:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow he summed up his whole life in this poem - it made me cry and my 13 year daughter didn&#039;t understand what was wrong with me - I pray she will grow old enough to know 1 day. We should treasure the elderly for they have wisdom no matter how small. God Bless him</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow he summed up his whole life in this poem &#8211; it made me cry and my 13 year daughter didn&#8217;t understand what was wrong with me &#8211; I pray she will grow old enough to know 1 day. We should treasure the elderly for they have wisdom no matter how small. God Bless him</p>
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		<title>By: Paul Moore</title>
		<link>http://www.smithmountainhomes.com/news/2008/10/profound-poetry/comment-page-1/#comment-35519</link>
		<dc:creator>Paul Moore</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jan 2010 18:16:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello Donall, thanks for the interesting info. I guess that is the way things happen when something is worth passing on, it gets twisted and remade in the passing. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello Donall, thanks for the interesting info. I guess that is the way things happen when something is worth passing on, it gets twisted and remade in the passing. <img src='http://www.smithmountainhomes.com/news/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Donall O'Brien</title>
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		<dc:creator>Donall O'Brien</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 10 Jan 2010 06:53:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi there. This is a fantastic poem. However we have the same version in Ireland written by an old lady named Katie, where this poem was found in here locker back in the 1950s.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi there. This is a fantastic poem. However we have the same version in Ireland written by an old lady named Katie, where this poem was found in here locker back in the 1950s.</p>
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		<title>By: Adela Jakic</title>
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		<dc:creator>Adela Jakic</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Dec 2009 14:56:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I totally agree with Hyria!!!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I totally agree with Hyria!!!!!</p>
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		<title>By: Adela Jakic</title>
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		<dc:creator>Adela Jakic</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Dec 2009 14:55:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh my God!!!!This is so deep,touching,heartbreaking and amazing at the same time!!!!It really toudhed my heart and made me a bit sad!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh my God!!!!This is so deep,touching,heartbreaking and amazing at the same time!!!!It really toudhed my heart and made me a bit sad!!</p>
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		<title>By: Hyria</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hyria</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Dec 2009 12:43:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Such a nice gift that he left behind, I&#039;m glad that all those people who read it appreciated it so much.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Such a nice gift that he left behind, I&#8217;m glad that all those people who read it appreciated it so much.</p>
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		<title>By: Macdaddy</title>
		<link>http://www.smithmountainhomes.com/news/2008/10/profound-poetry/comment-page-1/#comment-32587</link>
		<dc:creator>Macdaddy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Sep 2009 20:09:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Damn. That hurt.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Damn. That hurt.</p>
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		<title>By: Profound!</title>
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		<dc:creator>Profound!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Jun 2009 05:18:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Profound! This made me cry......for me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Profound! This made me cry&#8230;&#8230;for me.</p>
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